The Whispering Flame

The applause for Cedric Diggory had just begun to fade, a warm and satisfied murmur that settled over the Great Hall like a comfortable blanket. The three champions had been chosen. The tournament was set. Harry felt a knot of tension he hadn't realized he was holding finally loosen in his chest. For once, something momentous was happening at Hogwarts that had absolutely nothing to do with him. He could just be a student, a spectator. He could watch from the sidelines, safe and blessedly anonymous. He grinned at Ron, who was still clapping enthusiastically for the Hufflepuff champion, and felt a surge of simple, uncomplicated relief.
Then, the Goblet of Fire, which had dimmed to a cool blue, flared violently.
The flames roared up, turning a furious, blood-red, and spat a fourth piece of parchment high into the air. It was a dying, desperate gasp, an unnatural violation of the magic that had just concluded. A hush fell over the hall, so sudden and complete it was like a physical blow. Every eye was fixed on the slip of scorched paper as it fluttered down through the suddenly cold air.
Dumbledore, moving with a swiftness that belied his age, snatched it from the air before it could touch the ground. His fingers uncurled. For a long moment, he just stared at the name written there, his face illuminated by the magical candlelight, a mask of grim disbelief. The silence stretched, thin and fragile, until it snapped.
"Harry Potter."
Dumbledore’s voice wasn't a shout, but it carried to every corner of the cavernous room, sharp and clear as shattering glass.
Harry didn't feel anything at first. Just a distant, hollow ringing in his ears. The name didn't sound like his own. It was a curse, an accusation. He felt the weight of hundreds of pairs of eyes turning towards him, a physical pressure that threatened to crush him. He saw Hermione's hand fly to her mouth, her eyes wide with confusion and dawning horror. He saw Ron’s jaw drop, his expression shifting from shock to a dark, unreadable suspicion.
Then the noise began. It wasn't applause. It was a tidal wave of sound—shouts of outrage from the Durmstrang and Beauxbatons students, angry muttering from the Hufflepuffs who felt their champion had been cheated, and a low, vicious buzz of whispers from every corner of the hall. Cheater. Liar. Attention-seeker. The words slithered through the din, sinking into him like tiny, poisoned barbs. He felt hot and cold all at once, his skin prickling as if he were standing naked in the center of the room. He couldn't breathe. He was drowning in their judgment.
His gaze, wild and desperate, swept across the sea of faces, searching for... he didn't even know what. An ally? A friendly look? Instead, his eyes locked, as if drawn by some grim magnet, with Draco Malfoy's.
He braced himself for the inevitable. The triumphant sneer. The mocking laughter. The look of pure, unadulterated glee at seeing him publicly humiliated and endangered. It was what Malfoy did. It was who he was.
But it wasn't what Harry saw.
Across the room, through the flickering candlelight, Draco’s face was stark white, whiter than his ridiculously pale hair. His usual mask of aristocratic disdain had been completely obliterated. His grey eyes, normally narrowed in a perpetual sneer, were wide with genuine, unfeigned shock. His mouth was slightly agape, the silver glint of his Slytherin tie seeming to tighten around his throat. And under the shock, there was something else. Something complex and deeply unsettling that twisted in the pit of Harry's stomach. It was a flicker of raw, primal fear. Not the taunting fear of a bully seeing his victim in trouble, but the chilling, gut-deep terror of someone who understood, on a level Harry couldn't begin to fathom, the true danger of the flame that had just whispered his name.
The image burned itself onto the back of Harry's eyelids. While the rest of the world was screaming that he was a cheat, the one person he expected to revel in his downfall was looking at him as if he were already dead.
He moved before he was told to, before Professor McGonagall could even start to shepherd him towards the antechamber where the other champions waited. He was on his feet, stumbling away from the Gryffindor table, his chair scraping loudly in the renewed silence that followed Dumbledore’s pronouncement. He didn't look at Ron. He couldn't. The dark suspicion he'd seen on his best friend's face was a blade twisting in his gut, sharper and more painful than any curse. He didn't look at Hermione, whose horrified pity felt just as suffocating. He just looked at the massive oak doors of the Great Hall, a single point of escape in a world that was closing in on him.
He pushed through the throng of students, ignoring the hands that grabbed at his robes, the hissed insults that followed him like a cloud of stinging insects. Cheat. Potter stinks. Liar. The words were a venomous chorus, and he felt his cheeks burn with a shame so hot it was painful. He wasn't running towards the champions' room. He was running away. Away from the staring eyes, the pointing fingers, the suffocating weight of a destiny he never asked for and a crime he didn't commit.
His feet found the familiar path to the Grand Staircase, his legs moving on pure, panicked instinct. He took the steps two at a time, his breath coming in ragged, desperate gasps. He didn't know where he was going, only that it had to be up. Away. Higher than the whispers and the glares could reach. The portraits he passed watched him with curious, judgmental eyes, their painted inhabitants murmuring to each other as he fled past.
Finally, he reached the top of the Astronomy Tower. The air was thin and bitingly cold, a welcome shock to his overheated skin. He shoved open the heavy door to the outer balcony and stumbled into the vast, open night. The wind hit him like a physical blow, whipping his robes around his legs and tearing at his hair. He gripped the cold, damp stone of the parapet, his knuckles white, and leaned out into the void. Below, the grounds of Hogwarts were a patchwork of darkness and moonlight, silent and indifferent. The Black Lake was a sheet of polished obsidian. For a moment, the sheer scale of it all made him feel blessedly small, his problems insignificant against the sweep of the starry sky. He closed his eyes, drinking in the cold, clean air, trying to force the hammering of his heart to slow. He just needed a minute. One minute to breathe before he had to go back down and face them all.
The rasp of the heavy door swinging open behind him was a violation.
Harry’s entire body went rigid. His eyes snapped open. He didn't have to turn around to know. It was a sixth sense, a prickling on the back of his neck he’d developed over four years of mutual animosity. He’d expected taunts, maybe a hex in the back while he was distracted. He’d braced himself for the inevitable, sneering victory lap.
He slowly turned, his hand inching towards the wand in his pocket.
Draco Malfoy stood in the doorway, a pale specter framed against the darkness of the stairwell. The moonlight caught him, turning his hair to spun silver and carving his face into sharp, aristocratic planes. He stepped out onto the balcony, letting the door swing shut with a deep, final thud. And Harry’s breath caught in his throat.
The shock he'd seen on Malfoy's face in the Great Hall, the flicker of raw fear, was gone. It had been burned away and replaced by something far more terrifying. His grey eyes, usually cool and mocking, were blazing with a white-hot intensity. His mouth was a thin, hard line, and a muscle jumped in his clenched jaw. Every inch of him, from his rigid posture to the way his hands were balled into fists at his sides, radiated a pure, undiluted fury. It was a cold rage, sharp and honed, and it was directed entirely, unequivocally, at Harry. He looked like a man staring at the embodiment of his own damnation, and he looked ready to tear it apart with his bare hands.
"You cheated," Draco said. The words weren't shouted; they were far worse. They were low and sibilant, a venomous hiss that cut through the howl of the wind. He took a deliberate step forward, and then another, his polished black shoes making no sound on the stone. The fury radiating from him was a palpable force, a cold pressure in the air.
Harry’s hand, halfway to his wand, fell back to his side. "I didn't," he shot back, his voice cracking with the strain of the last hour. "I didn't put my name in."
"Liar," Draco breathed, advancing again. Harry instinctively took a step back, then another, until the back of his legs hit the low stone wall of the parapet. The cold seeped through the fabric of his robes, a sharp, unforgiving line against his skin. He was trapped.
"It's never enough for you, is it?" Malfoy sneered, his face a pale, furious mask in the moonlight. He was close now, close enough for Harry to see the frantic, silver glint in his wide grey eyes. "The Boy Who Lived. The saviour. The Gryffindor hero. You couldn't just let someone else have the spotlight for one bloody night. You couldn't stand it, seeing Diggory get the glory. You had to find a way to make it about you. Always about Saint Potter."
Every word was a perfectly aimed dart, striking the rawest of Harry's insecurities. It was what they were all whispering downstairs. It was what he'd seen in Ron's eyes. To hear it articulated with such surgical cruelty from Malfoy made something inside him snap.
"You think I want this?" Harry's voice rose, shaking with a rage of his own. "You think I want to be in this tournament? To have the entire school hate me? To have everyone look at me like I'm some kind of… of monster?" He gestured wildly at the grounds below, at the castle full of his accusers. "I would give anything to be anyone else right now! Someone no one ever looks at!"
"Don't you dare play the victim with me," Malfoy snarled, leaning in. The wind whipped his white-blond hair across his face, but his eyes never left Harry's. They burned. "You have no idea what you've done. This isn't some schoolyard game, Potter. This isn't about winning a Quidditch match or getting house points."
"Then what is it about?" Harry challenged, baffled by the sheer intensity, the undercurrent of genuine panic in Malfoy's voice. This wasn't their usual script. This was something else entirely. "What are you so afraid of?"
Malfoy flinched as if Harry had struck him. The question seemed to shatter his composure for a fraction of a second, revealing the raw fear beneath. But it was immediately swallowed by an even colder, more potent rage.
"You fool," he whispered, the sound almost lost to the wind. "You absolute, arrogant fool. Do you think this magic is a toy? An unbreakable vow has been made. The Goblet has bound you. You have to compete, whether you want to or not." He took the final step, his body caging Harry against the stone. "There are people—powerful people—who have been waiting for an opportunity like this. A way to get past the school's wards. A way to get to you. And you just handed it to them on a silver platter because you couldn't bear to be out of the limelight."
Harry stared at him, his own anger faltering in the face of Malfoy's chilling certainty. He wasn't just taunting him. He was warning him. The fear Harry had seen on his face in the Great Hall hadn't been for a rival; it had been for an outcome he seemed to understand with terrifying clarity.
"I didn't do it," Harry said again, but this time it wasn't a defense. It was a plea. A desperate attempt to make him understand.
Malfoy just shook his head, a slow, grim motion. A look of utter disgust twisted his features, aimed not just at Harry, but at the entire situation, at a fate that now seemed horribly, inextricably linked between them. The fury in his eyes was so absolute it was almost luminous, a terrifying fire in the pale moonlight. He looked at Harry not as a rival, but as a catastrophe he was desperate, and failing, to contain.
The words were a raw wound, torn from some deep, dark place inside him. Before Harry could even process the warning, the space between them vanished. Draco’s hands shot out, fisting in the thick fabric of Harry’s Gryffindor robes. He yanked, hard. Harry stumbled forward with a choked gasp, his chest slamming into Draco’s with a solid thud. The cold stone of the parapet bit into the backs of his thighs, the only thing keeping him from toppling backward into the abyss. He was caged.
"Do you have any idea what you've done?" Draco snarled, the words a hot, sharp puff of air against Harry’s lips. Their breath mingled in the frigid night, a visible cloud of shared panic and rage.
Up close, Draco was a terrifying spectacle of contained violence. The moonlight bleached all color from his skin, leaving only the stark black of his pupils in the furious silver of his irises. A single, perfect vein pulsed at his temple, a frantic, desperate rhythm. Harry could feel the heat radiating from him, a furnace of pure fury that burned away the night's chill. He could smell him—the clean, sharp scent of expensive soap and something else, something metallic and wild, like ozone before a lightning strike.
Harry’s hands came up instinctively, pressing against the hard wall of Draco’s chest to push him away, but it was like shoving against granite. Draco’s arms were rigid, his grip on Harry's robes unrelenting. The knuckles of his pale hands were white, digging into Harry’s sternum with bruising force.
"Let go of me, Malfoy," Harry ground out, his voice tight and strained. But there was no force behind the words. His mind was reeling, thrown completely off balance by the sheer, shocking intimacy of the assault. He could feel the frantic thud of Draco’s heart against his own ribs, or maybe it was his own heart hammering against Draco’s. The distinction was lost in the violent press of their bodies.
"You think this is a game?" Draco hissed, his face so close Harry could see the tiny, frantic tremor in his lower lip. His eyes were wide, possessed. "You think my father and his… friends… won't see this for the gift it is? An invitation? They have been waiting, Potter. Waiting for a crack in Dumbledore's defenses. And you just blew the doors wide open for them."
The mention of Lucius Malfoy sent a jolt of cold dread through Harry, sharp enough to cut through his anger. This wasn't about schoolboy rivalry. This was real. This was the dark, shadowy world he’d only ever glimpsed, the world of Death Eaters and hushed, fearful whispers. And Malfoy, for all his blustering arrogance, was clearly terrified of it. Terrified of what Harry had just accidentally become embroiled in.
"I told you," Harry said, his voice dropping to a desperate whisper. "I didn't do it."
"It doesn't matter!" Draco shook him, a sharp, violent rattle that made Harry’s teeth click together. "You think He cares about the truth? He cares about power. About opportunity. And you… you witless, glory-hound, Gryffindor moron… you just served yourself up."
The insult was familiar, almost comforting in its predictability, but the terror lacing it was not. Draco's grip seemed to change, the anger in his fingers lessening, replaced by something that felt more like desperation. His knuckles were no longer digging in to hurt, but to hold on, as if Harry were a lifeline and a lead weight all at once. The line of his jaw was impossibly tight, and for a second, Harry thought he might be on the verge of tears. The thought was so absurd, so utterly alien, that it stunned Harry into silence.
He stopped pushing. His hands flattened against the fine wool of Draco's sweater, feeling the taut muscles of his chest beneath. He was aware, with a sudden, shocking clarity, of every point of contact between them. The press of their hips, the brush of their thighs, the solid, unyielding heat of Draco's body against his. A strange, unwelcome warmth began to coil low in his belly, a traitorous flicker of heat that had nothing to do with anger and everything to do with the raw, animal energy crackling in the air. His breath hitched.
Draco must have felt it, the subtle shift in Harry's body, the infinitesimal relaxing of his resistance. His furious tirade faltered. The sound of their harsh breathing filled the sudden silence, punctuated by the lonely howl of the wind around the tower. Draco’s gaze, which had been darting around Harry’s face as if searching for a sign of understanding, suddenly fixed on his eyes. The inferno in them banked, the silver turning molten and uncertain. The fury was still there, but it was now warring with something else, something confused and hungry and just as terrifying. Slowly, as if pulled by a force he couldn't control, Draco’s eyes dropped from Harry’s. They lingered for a beat on his parted lips, still damp from their mingled breath. The air grew thick, heavy, charged with a new and infinitely more dangerous kind of tension.
The silence that fell was heavier than stone, broken only by their ragged breaths puffing white in the frigid air. Harry’s back was still pressed against the cold, rough parapet, the chill of it a stark contrast to the searing heat radiating from Draco’s body. Draco’s hands were still fisted in his robes, knuckles white, but the grip had lost its violence. It was anchoring them now, a desperate point of contact in the dizzying aftermath.
Harry’s lips were tingling, bruised and wet. He could taste Draco—a sharp, clean taste like winter air and something else, something uniquely, infuriatingly Malfoy. He stared into those pale grey eyes, now wide and dark-pupiled, searching for the familiar sneer, the arrogant cruelty. But it was gone. In its place was a raw, mirrored shock, and beneath it, the smouldering embers of the same desperate heat that was coiling low in Harry’s own stomach.
Draco’s throat worked as he swallowed, his gaze dropping to Harry’s mouth for a fraction of a second before snapping back up. The decision was made in that flicker of an eye. He didn’t let go. Instead, his head lowered again, slower this time, deliberate. There was no anger left, only a stark, terrifying wanting.
"Potter," he breathed, the name a ghost of a sound, and then his mouth was on Harry’s again.
This time, it wasn’t a crash. It was a claiming. The kiss was deep and searching, Draco’s lips moving against his with a surety that sent a tremor through Harry’s entire body. A low sound, something between a whimper and a groan, was torn from Harry’s throat, and he hated it. He hated himself for it. But his body, that traitorous vessel, was already lost. His eyes fluttered shut.
When Draco’s tongue traced the seam of his lips, a bold, insolent request, Harry parted them without a conscious thought. The invasion was immediate, hot and slick, and the kiss devolved into something primal. This wasn't a fight anymore; it was a mutual consumption. Harry’s hands, which had been braced against Draco’s chest, slid upwards, his fingers tangling in the impossibly soft, silver-blond hair at the nape of Draco’s neck, pulling him closer, harder.
Draco groaned into his mouth, a raw, guttural sound that vibrated through Harry’s teeth. One of his hands released its grip on Harry’s robes, sliding up his chest, over the frantic beat of his heart, to cup the side of his neck. His thumb stroked the sensitive skin just below Harry’s ear, and Harry arched into the touch, a fresh wave of heat washing through him. He could feel the solid length of Draco’s erection pressing against his thigh through their layers of clothing, a startling, undeniable proof that this madness wasn’t one-sided. The knowledge was a spark to dry tinder. Harry felt his own cock, already thick and heavy, give a hard pulse in response.
He shifted his hips, a small, involuntary movement, chasing the friction. Draco’s other hand slid from his robes, down his torso, a burning trail of heat that made every nerve ending fire. The hand paused over the strained fabric of his trousers, fingers splayed just above the ache. Harry’s breath hitched. He was pinned between the cold stone and Draco’s hot, demanding body, lost in a storm of sensation he couldn't begin to understand.
Draco broke the kiss, resting his forehead against Harry’s. They were both panting, their breath mingling as one. His grey eyes were hazy with lust, lips swollen and red.
"You have no idea," Draco whispered, his voice thick and rough. His hand finally closed over the front of Harry's trousers, his grip firm and possessive. Harry gasped, his head falling back against the stone as Draco’s fingers tightened, pressing the length of him, learning his shape through the fabric. "What you do."
The words made no sense, but the feeling did. The humiliation and rage of the evening, the fear of the tournament, it all melted away under the crushing weight of this forbidden, impossible want. He wanted to push Draco away, to curse him, to run. But what he did was press his hips forward, a silent, desperate plea for more.
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