A Taste of Eternity

A detective who senses the supernatural and a vampire pathologist hiding in plain sight clash over a series of ritualistic murders in New Orleans. As their hunt for the killer draws them closer, they must risk their secrets and their lives for a forbidden love that could be their ultimate salvation or their final damnation.

The Scent of Iron and Rain
The rain had finally stopped, leaving the French Quarter to steam under the oppressive August moon. Water dripped from wrought-iron balconies and pooled in the uneven flagstones of the alley, reflecting the lurid neon glow of a distant Bourbon Street bar. The air was a thick gumbo of smells: damp decay, sweet olive, stale beer, and beneath it all, the coppery tang of blood. For Detective Gabriel Santos, that last scent was a clarion call, one he’d answered too many times.
He ducked under the yellow tape, the plastic snapping against the back of his damp collar. The uniforms gave him a wide berth, their faces pale and tight under the harsh glare of the portable floodlights. They knew his reputation. They knew the kinds of cases that seemed to find him, the ones that didn't fit neatly into reports.
This one was already screaming its otherness.
It wasn't just the smell of blood, which was strong enough to coat the back of his throat. It was something else. A charge in the air, a low-frequency hum that vibrated in his teeth and made the hairs on his arms stand on end. He’d felt it before, in other places where the veil between worlds had been torn open by violence. It was the psychic residue of something ancient and hungry, a presence that left a stain on reality itself. He tasted ozone and old iron on his tongue, a flavor like sucking on a tarnished silver coin.
The victim was in the center of the small, hidden courtyard, a space tucked between a shuttered Creole restaurant and a voodoo shop whose windows were cluttered with gris-gris bags and bleached skulls. She was young, maybe early twenties, her life’s story cut brutally short. Her body was arranged in a grotesque parody of repose, limbs positioned with a chilling precision. She’d been laid out on a bed of black feathers, her sightless eyes staring up at the sliver of starless sky visible between the rooftops.
But it was the carvings that held his attention, that made the hum in his skull ratchet up a notch. They weren't the clumsy work of some junkie or the frantic slashes of a crime of passion. These were symbols, etched into her skin with a surgeon’s care. Geometric patterns spiraled across her torso, intersecting in ways that felt both mathematical and deeply, fundamentally wrong. They seemed to writhe in the flickering light, drawing his gaze, promising a meaning he couldn't grasp but could feel coiled in the pit of his stomach.
"Jesus, Gabe," Officer Miller muttered from the edge of the scene, his hand hovering near his mouth. "What the hell is this?"
Gabriel didn't answer. He crouched down, careful not to disturb anything, the scent of wrongness growing stronger. The air here was thin, stretched taut. It felt like the moments before a lightning strike. This wasn't just a murder. This was a ritual. A ceremony. Something had been summoned here, or invoked. The lingering energy was a signature, a boast left by the killer. It was a language Gabriel couldn't speak but had been cursed to understand on a primal level. It was the scent of iron, yes, but not just from blood. It was the scent of ancient metal, of cold altars and colder intentions. It was the scent of something that had no place in the world of men, and it was getting stronger.
The hum intensified, coalescing, and he realized it wasn't just the scene anymore. It was a person. He looked up from the victim's carved skin and saw her standing just inside the police tape, a sleek silhouette against the chaotic backdrop of flashing lights.
Dr. Celeste Thorne, the M.E. The nameplate on her kit bag gleamed. She was new, a recent transfer from somewhere up north. He’d read her file but hadn't met her yet. The file hadn't done her justice. It had listed qualifications and degrees, but it couldn't capture the unnerving stillness she projected. While uniforms shuffled their feet and forensics techs moved with tense, jerky motions, she stood as if carved from marble, her gaze sweeping the scene with an unnerving, placid focus.
She was dressed in practical, dark trousers and a tailored silk blouse that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it. Her hair was the color of polished obsidian, pulled back in a severe knot that emphasized the sharp, elegant lines of her cheekbones and jaw. She looked less like a pathologist arriving at a slaughter and more like an aristocrat assessing a particularly disappointing piece of art.
As she moved forward, her steps were silent on the wet flagstones. The discordant hum that had been vibrating in Gabriel’s bones didn't vanish; it changed pitch, focusing on her like a magnet finding true north. The air around her was different. It cut through the alley's foul miasma with a scent he couldn’t place—something cold and clean, like a subterranean spring, laced with the faint, ghostly fragrance of night-blooming jasmine and old, cold stone. It was a scent of impossible things, of places that had never seen the sun.
She knelt opposite him, on the other side of the body, her movements fluid and economical. She didn't so much as glance at him. Her eyes, a shade of pale, clear gray like a winter sky, were fixed on the victim. There was no flicker of horror, no gasp of revulsion. There was only a profound, analytical calm that Gabriel found more disturbing than the ritualistic carvings themselves.
“What’s your preliminary, Detective?” Her voice was low and smooth, cultured, with the barest trace of an accent he couldn't identify. It was like her scent—unplaceable and ancient.
The question, so devoid of emotion, scraped against his raw nerves. “My preliminary?” he bit out, his voice rough. “My preliminary is that this is some seriously fucked-up black magic bullshit. The whole alley feels wrong. Can’t you feel it?”
She finally lifted her gaze to meet his. For a second, he felt like a specimen under a microscope. Her gray eyes were utterly devoid of warmth, holding a depth that felt centuries old, not years. “What I ‘feel,’ Detective Santos, is the ambient humidity and the early stages of rigor mortis. What I see is a homicide with unusual post-mortem mutilation. I’ll leave the ‘black magic bullshit’ to the tourists on Bourbon Street.”
Her dismissal was so complete, so absolute, it was like a slap. A cold fury, sharp and sudden, rose in his chest. “Look at the symbols, Doctor. This isn’t random mutilation. This is a message. A ritual.”
“All killers have rituals,” she countered, her voice dropping to an almost subliminal whisper as she leaned closer to the body, her attention already stolen away from him. She slipped on a pair of latex gloves with a faint, crisp snap. “Some leave a signature, others leave a calling card. This one is merely more theatrical than most. My job is to find the physical evidence, not to interpret the killer’s artistic inclinations.”
She reached out, her gloved fingers tracing the air just above one of the spirals carved into the victim’s stomach, her touch impossibly delicate, as if she were reading something he couldn't see. The air around her seemed to shimmer, and the hum in his head spiked, a sharp, piercing note that made him dizzy. She was a void, a place where his senses went to die, yet she was also a beacon, pulling all that strange energy into herself. He didn't know if he wanted to back away from her or grab her by the shoulders and shake her until that icy composure cracked.
The desire to argue, to force her to acknowledge the palpable wrongness of the scene, died on his lips. It was useless. Arguing with her would be like shouting at a glacier. Instead, he found himself trapped by the bizarre symphony playing out in his senses. The raw, violent energy of the murder scene was a chaotic shriek, but she was a perfect, silent chord at its center. Her presence didn't just add to the noise; it organized it, drew it in, and muted it.
He watched her, forgetting for a moment the mutilated girl between them. The pull he felt was a physical thing, a hook sunk deep behind his sternum. It wasn't just lust, though that was certainly part of it. He was a man, and she was a breathtaking woman, all sharp angles and fluid grace. The severe knot of her hair exposed the pale, vulnerable curve of her neck, and he had a sudden, insane urge to know what her skin would feel like against his lips, if it would be as cold as the energy she projected. The thought was so jarring, so wildly inappropriate, that it sent a jolt through him.
His gift, the curse that had isolated him his entire life, had always been a simple alarm bell. It screamed danger, it whispered of ghosts, it thrummed in the presence of things that clawed at the edges of the mortal world. But with her, it was different. It was a complex, layered signal he couldn't parse. It was a warning and a lure, all at once. She felt like a predator, yes—the stillness of a great cat waiting in the shadows—but also like a sanctuary. She was a void where the psychic screaming stopped, a place of deep, silent cold. She was a winter night in the middle of a Louisiana summer, and he found himself wanting to step into the frost, to see if it would burn.
He tracked the line of her shoulders, the subtle shift of her weight as she leaned in. She moved with an economy that bordered on unnatural, each gesture precise and deliberate. There was no fidgeting, no unconscious adjustment. It was as if she had consciously decided on every single movement before she made it, a being of absolute and total self-control. It was mesmerizing. And terrifying.
“The exsanguination is… thorough,” she murmured, more to herself than to him. Her voice was a low thrum that vibrated right through the soles of his boots. “Almost no lividity. The blood was taken while she was alive. Or very shortly after.”
He forced his mind back to the case, latching onto the details to anchor himself. “Taken how? There are no puncture wounds on the neck. No obvious signs of drainage.”
“No,” she agreed, her pale eyes scanning the victim’s body with an intensity that made Gabriel’s skin crawl. “Not obvious ones.”
The pull intensified, coiling in his gut like a serpent. He wanted to close the distance between them, to breathe in that strange, cold scent of stone and midnight flowers, to see if the charge in the air around her would shock him if he got too close. He wanted to understand the contradiction she represented—the calm in the storm, the silence in the cacophony. He was a man who navigated a world of unseen energies, and he had just met a woman who felt like a black hole, absorbing it all, her own nature a mystery deeper and more compelling than the murder laid out at their feet. He was drawn to her not just as a man is to a woman, but as a compass needle is to a strange and powerful new pole, one that threatened to shatter his understanding of the world.
Her gloved finger paused, hovering over the most complex of the symbols, a vicious spiral carved into the pale flesh of the girl's abdomen. It wasn't just a spiral. It ended in a three-pronged fork, a mark designed to look like a lightning strike or a raven’s claw. It was crude, gouged into the skin with a blade that was sharp but wielded by an unsteady hand. Yet, the design itself… it was flawless. An exact replica.
A chasm opened in Celeste's memory, a hundred and fifty years wide. The scent of rain and rot in the alley faded, replaced for a heartbeat by the smell of burning peat and frozen earth in a land far from this humid city. She felt the ghost of icy wind on her cheeks and tasted the phantom tang of spilled blood—old blood, powerful blood—on her tongue. A name, a title really, echoed in the silent vaults of her mind: Le Dévoreur d'Âmes. The Soul Eater. An ancient, fanatical sect of mortals who believed they could steal a vampire’s power by consuming their essence through ritual sacrifice. They were butchers who thought themselves holy men, and they had hunted her kind with a fervor that bordered on religious ecstasy.
But they were gone. Wiped out. She had seen to it herself, in a bloody crusade across a continent, a chapter of her existence she had buried so deep she had almost convinced herself it was a nightmare. The final battle had been in a frozen monastery in the Pyrenees, its stones stained with the blood of her enemies and, shamefully, her own kin. She had been the one to strike the final blow against their leader, a man whose eyes burned with the same mad light she saw reflected in these clumsy carvings.
This symbol was their sigil. Their claim.
A cold, hard fury, something she hadn't allowed herself to feel in decades, coiled in her gut. It was a familiar sensation, a predator’s rage. It was the part of her she worked so hard to keep chained. For someone to resurrect this filth, this forgotten heresy, here in her city, her sanctuary… it was not just a murder. It was a challenge. A message directed at her, or at the very least, her kind.
She felt Gabriel's eyes on her, his focus like a physical weight. He was too perceptive. His strange, unsettling sensitivity was a liability she couldn’t afford. He would feel the shift in her, the sudden spike of cold rage that momentarily disrupted the placid ocean of her control. She had to bury it. Now.
She forced a slow breath into lungs that didn’t need it, pushing the memories and the fury back down into their tomb. She straightened up, her spine rigid, and began a clinical recitation, her voice a carefully modulated monotone.
“The cuts are deep, but hesitant. See the feathering at the edges? The killer is trying for precision but lacks the surgical skill. Probably a collector's knife, something with a ceremonial look but a practical edge. The pattern is derivative.” She waved a dismissive hand over the sigil that had just screamed a declaration of war at her soul. “A pastiche of different occult symbols. Celtic, Norse, a bit of ceremonial magic iconography. It’s meant to look profound, but it’s gibberish. Our killer is an enthusiast, not a practitioner. Someone who reads a lot of books but has no real understanding.”
Every word was a perfectly crafted lie. The sigil wasn't gibberish; it was a specific and potent claim. The killer wasn’t an amateur; they were a disciple.
Gabriel didn’t move. The silence stretched, thick and heavy with unspoken suspicion. The air between them crackled, the invisible energy of the alley now seeming to flow directly from him to her and back again, a closed circuit of doubt and fascination. He was a bloodhound who had caught the scent of a lie, even if he didn't know the shape of the truth it was meant to hide.
“Gibberish,” he repeated, his voice flat. He didn’t believe her. Not for a second.
Celeste met his gaze, her own a mask of cool professionalism. She held it, letting him search her eyes for the truth she had just expertly concealed. Let him look. He would find nothing but the reflection of the flashing police lights and the cold, unbreachable wall she had spent centuries perfecting. But behind that wall, a war drum had begun to beat, a slow, steady rhythm that promised violence to come. An old ghost had just stepped out of its grave and into the humid, rain-slicked streets of New Orleans, and it had found her.
The story continues...
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